Made me lol!!1
Quite a dashing one.
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Made me lol!!1
Quite a dashing one.
- The Weakness Finder
zach hadel newground
I really liked this! I think the thumbnail gives off a less finished feel, but the actual cartoon is really well made!
Improving the voice acting would help make it feel more lived in and set in universe. The microphone quality inconsistency and some of the flat line acting brought me out of it a little especially "the eye of the tiger" part. That's the kind of thing that gets easier the more voice acting you do though, so I think that'll probably just improve with time.
I also feel like this could look even better if it was animated in a vector software like Adobe Animate or Toon Boom, the pixel lines feel slightly amateur in an otherwise really solid cartoon! Really enjoyed this though, keep up the great work!
Thank you for the criticism! Although I think in terms of animation I think I’ll stick to the same software because 1, I’m used to it and 2, I just like the more indie look than professional. Thanks again though for the compliments!
Your use of visual humor instead of relying on dialog makes this work pretty well for anyone watching!
I'd say focus on getting some more original music and sounds, and Maybe stick to one software/export everything at a larger size? There's a lot of randomly blurred/pixelated parts, that's something that shouldn't happen in a vector software like flash.
For the music check out the music portal here on Newgrounds! There's tons of free to use music and you can credit the creator in your project!
Not bad, keep it up!
thank you for your response.
I first time used other software i.e. AFTER EFFECTS and I know only the basics of it therefore the result is not so satisfying. my previous animations, that I have not uploaded here, were made only using animate cc.
I will follow your suggestion and remember it for the future.
Can't believe I won! woohoo! :D
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Very fun little game good job! :D
Sounds great! I would love to use this for a little game I'm making if that's ok!
-Charlie
Sure thing.
This is great! May I use this for a little game I'm making?
-Charlie
sure
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